Too Sick for Blue Sky!

This was a story test for Blue Sky. I was supposed to do a scenario in which two characters are in a room and one annoys the other, with action and humor elements. Or something. I didn't get the job. C'est la vie. (Maybe some of the spatial arrangements were kind of unclear...or the pacing was wrong...or maybe it was just too weird...)
Oh, I should mention that the guy beating the monster with the bisected nurse was my friend Jody Sol's idea.^^ He's quite the smarty pants.